Saturday, November 8, 2008

Poet for bluey

Last week i sleep after asar then i woke up on maghrib and guess wat,i suddenly got dis idea or mayb inspiration to write a poet for her, its not so nice la but OK la for newbie like me write such thing, hehe... And dis is how it sound...

fatina is the name,
bluey is the nickname,
this is the girl that my heart got tamed,
it is the beginning of a wonderful game,
the game of love that i will frame.

the love story start with full of hate,
the love that come after the deepest hate,
the prank and joke from me,a silly classmate,
that fill her heart with anger and hate,
make her fell like changing class,
just to avoid that silly classmate.

she start to hate me,beginning on Monday,
since then,i start to apologizing from day to day,
to God i pray,
hope that she will forgive me some day,
15/8/2007 is a memorable day,
i get her friendship voucher on the next day,
as a sign of forgiveness on that wonderful day,
our friendship start on that unforgettable day.

her personalities grab my attention,
her beauty sometime gives me 'tension',
because it grab other guys attention,
but hey,i won't the selection,
obviously because i grab her attention.

today, the target hits by the dart,
i have successfully retain her heart,
other guys, please don't take it so hard,
because the love has fully fill our heart.


OK,so that how it sound but the problem is, i still don't have any idea about the tittle of this poet, if u reader have any,just comment on this blog..OK,need to study right now, technical analysis is just around the corner, chow...

3 comments:

Mr.Jonny said...
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husna huda said...

"her personalities grab my attention,
her beauty sometime gives me 'tension',
because it grab other guys attention,
but hey,i won't the selection,
obviously because i grab her attention."

p/s: u r so sweet.. ur love story just like a fairytale that i know.. The title is "BEAUTY & THE BEAST"... hehehe.. (apac)

pha_eint470 said...

her personalities grab my attention,
her beauty sometime gives me 'tension',
because it grab other guys attention,
but hey,i won't the selection,
obviously because i grab her attention.

sure??
ur juz too sure..
lucky im not the competitors...
not beauty n da beast laa pac..
lion king..(timun n pumba)
hahahaha!!!